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I Don't Love You

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It sucks.

It sucks to know what it feels like to fall in love.  And it sucks to know that what we have isn't love.  

It sucks to know that we won't last forever.  And it sucks that every time you tell me you love me I have to lie back.

I tried to ignore it because I knew it wasn't meant to be.  But this is nothing ordinary, it's not like I could pretend it wasn't there.  I'm the master of hiding things, but this I couldn't deny.  

But it sucks to know it.  It sucks to pretend like I really believe we could make it somewhere.

It's like an act every day... I don't have to pretend that I really like you... that much is the truth.

But I don't love you.



And it sucks.
:iconthewrittenrevolution:, I'd like to know what you think of this style. I usually use a more formal way of words, but this reflects a lot more of how I actually talk and how my thoughts really come out. I'm not so sure about it. Feedback, please!



Okay, so in case you're wondering what that... thing up there in the top of the comments is, it's for this new group I joined, called #theWrittenRevolution. They want to know what kind of feedback to give me... so... yeah. I reccomend you join, so far it's great! *joined about 3 hours ago*

So, as for this piece, it comes from the heart. True story.


2009

~emo-black-cat
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ethelinexile's avatar
I agree with mwto.